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A Reader of Fictions: Review: Ashes of Twilight

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Thursday, February 7, 2013

Review: Ashes of Twilight

Ashes of Twilight
Ashes Trilogy, Book 1

Author: Kassy Tayler
Pages: 320
Publisher: St. Martin's Griffin
Source: For review from YA Books Central

Description from Goodreads:
Wren MacAvoy works as a coal miner for a domed city that was constructed in the mid-nineteenth century to protect the royal blood line of England when astronomers spotted a comet on a collision course with Earth. Humanity would be saved by the most groundbreaking technology of the time. But after nearly 200 years of life beneath the dome, society has become complacent and the coal is running out. Plus there are those who wonder, is there life outside the dome or is the world still consumed by fire? When one of Wren's friends escapes the confines of the dome, he is burned alive and put on display as a warning to those seeking to disrupt the dome’s way of life. But Alex’s final words are haunting. “The sky is blue.” What happens next is a whirlwind of adventure, romance, conspiracy and the struggle to stay alive in a world where nothing is as it seems. Wren unwittingly becomes a catalyst for a revolution that destroys the dome and the only way to survive might be to embrace what the entire society has feared their entire existence.

First Sentence: "The Bible teaches us that the heavens and earth were made by the one true God."

Review:
Having seen a couple of uninspiring reviews for Ashes of Twilight, I did not have high hopes for my own enjoyment of the novel. However, when a review copy comes, you do what you have to do. Thankfully, I enjoyed this more than my compatriots did, finding it an easy, enjoyable read.

The best part of Ashes of Twilight is the writing. Tayler's style suited me well, with pretty sentences and just enough slang that I guessed the book was set in England. By the end of the book, I marked down several quotes I enjoyed. Tayler has a mature writing style, with no abuse of sentence fragments.

Wren MacAvoy wants more out of life. Born a shiner, she climbs out of the mines every day into the more dangerous reaches of her domed world to speculate on what's above. The rulers say that flames fill the world outside, making the dome a necessity, but she does not think she sees flames out there. Wren is a seeker, curious and unwilling to settle for anything, most especially a life she's been told to live and a boy she's been told to marry.

The characters that stole the show were the animals. I just love adorable animals with tons of personality in my fiction, and Tayler included bunches. Even better, none of them die, which there has been altogether to much of in my recent reads. Tayler kills people instead. Cat, a cleverly named cat, is my personal favorite. Pip, a canary, also warms my heart. So do the ponies with whom Wren works in the mines, who would not have survived without her aid. I love Wren and Pace for taking such good care of them, and I love Tayler for not putting animals in just to kill them off tragically.

While I did enjoy Ashes of Twilight, I really wish there had been more to it, something unique. None of the elements herein were unfamiliar to me: the dome, the class hierarchy punishing to those on the bottom-most rungs, the terrible air quality, the mining, the instalove, the abusive guy who wants to marry Wren, the twist regarding Wren's father, or the plot arc. All of this I have read in other dystopian novels, not all together like this, but I would still hope to see something solely of Tayler's creation. I have read a lot of dystopian novels, however, so this might not be an issue for readers without so much knowledge of the genre.

One element which should have been better handled is the inclusion of the biblical references. For whatever reason, the shiners only have one book, The Bible. As such, Wren references scripture a lot, as she does in the first sentence. I never really could see a point made with this. The references come thick and fast at the beginning of the novel, but drop off significantly towards the end, without seeming to impact the plot. These should either have served a plot purpose or be taken out entirely. They were not preachy particularly, just out of place.

The most worrying aspect of Ashes of Twilight is Wren's tendency to exhibit TSTL syndrome. As I mentioned, the guy she was supposed to marry, James is abusive. In one of the first scenes, he tries to force himself on her. She is, rightly, uncomfortable around him for the rest of the book. However, she also tells him multiple times that he is a great guy who will make some other girl very happy. No, Wren, he's actually not a great guy, and this makes me doubt your sanity. Can we please stop this trend of pretending that attempted rapists are the kinds of guys any girl should want? They're not. End of story.

Ashes of Twilight does have rather a slow pace, but, if you do not mind that, you might enjoy this book. Tayler's debut might work better for those without too much familiarity with the dystopian genre.

Rating: 2.5/5

Favorite Quote: "'I'd rather be burned after I'm gone. Because then at least maybe my ashes would have a chance to escape."

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18 Comments:

Blogger Kayla Beck said...

I have had this book sitting by my bed since it came out last year. I really want to read it (more so now that I know that no animals die), but it seems like I never get to read stuff for me anymore. *sigh*

February 7, 2013 at 5:14 PM  
Blogger Lenore Appelhans said...

Yay for not killing animals!

February 8, 2013 at 8:34 AM  
Blogger Christina said...

Join the club. Our lives are so hard!

February 8, 2013 at 9:43 AM  
Blogger Christina said...

Hurrah! There were a bunch of them too, and I was prepared for tragedy. But they all survived: the cat, the bird, the ponies. YAY!

February 8, 2013 at 9:43 AM  
Blogger Lynn K. said...

When I first heard about this I was reminded of Gurren Lagann (anime), minus the mecha. That cover is eye catching too!

I thought Wren was a guy until I read your review. o.O And I've never read a book with many animals before so I guess that's an incentive, plus the story does sound interesting.

February 9, 2013 at 10:46 AM  
Blogger Renae M. said...

Rape is bad. Seriously, authors, get that through your heads and stop writing stupid main characters. SMH.

Hmm, interesting with the Biblical references. It would have been really interesting if the author had tied those into the plot somehow, but if not they'd probably just seem superfluous.

February 9, 2013 at 7:46 PM  
Blogger Nori said...

What a strange sounding book! I'm stuck on the biblical commentary and the jerk guy she was supposed to marry...It's hard for me to put all of the elements together with the animals...I kind of want to read it just to see how the author combines all of these things.

February 10, 2013 at 6:34 PM  
Blogger Kirsten! said...

I've been kind of burnt out on dystopian lately, but if this has a bunch of adorable animals that play a big-ish role and DON'T die, I'm going to have to check it out. The setting sounds interesting, too. I like these sorts of claustrophobic locales.

February 11, 2013 at 12:08 AM  
Blogger Christina said...

Oh, I haven't seen that anime yet.

Nope, Wren is generally a girl's name, I think, in so much as it is actually used for a name at all.

February 11, 2013 at 8:47 AM  
Blogger Christina said...

Yes. This needs to stop.

They really did seem superfluous. The Bible was the only book they had, but there wasn't really any worship. It's odd.

February 11, 2013 at 8:48 AM  
Blogger Christina said...

The jerk guy was the worst part. Grrrr.

February 11, 2013 at 8:48 AM  
Blogger Christina said...

The animals are adorable and do play a fairly large role. And the society is claustrophobic for sure. Everything's in a dome, and even smaller than that, the mines, and a cave within the mines.

February 11, 2013 at 8:49 AM  
Blogger Ash said...

Ever since I saw this cover o some blogs, I feel in love with it, yeah I'm that easy to please! Loved the blurb and I'm getting this book as fast as I can.

February 11, 2013 at 10:23 AM  
Blogger Christina said...

The cover is lovely, and the second book's cover is even better.

February 11, 2013 at 10:33 AM  
Blogger Lynn K. said...

I had no idea! People with English names here usually have normal/common ones. Except for a dude in one of my old classes, his name was 'Rooster'. >.>

February 12, 2013 at 8:31 AM  
Blogger Christina said...

Most of the names for YA heroines aren't ones we hear a lot over here either. Wait, was Rooster a nickname or did his birth certificate and driver's license and all that actually say Rooster?

February 12, 2013 at 8:38 AM  
Blogger Vivien said...

Uhhh...*removes from wishlist* Yea. This sounds like the exact opposite of what I like. I don't think I'll be reading this one.

March 3, 2013 at 6:16 PM  
Blogger Christina said...

Yeah, it's pretty good except for the relationship dynamics which are seriously upsetting. You won't be missing out on anything.

March 4, 2013 at 12:01 PM  

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